Someone once told me,
I should write a non-rhyming poem.
As my stupid words smear themselves
across pure white page,
I wonder if I am ultimately wasting
my reader's time.
My classmates are probably reading this, thinking
"Does he have a point?"
O, joyous mystery!
I like this poem because it doesnt rhyme and it's short.
ReplyDeleteand its sorta funny, and has a dash of mockery.
but your not wasting my time because i didnt have to spend an hour reading! haha
Thanks, Russell!
ReplyDeleteI just laughed at Nikki's comment.
ReplyDeleteI honestly don't think your waisting your time ever if your writing anything on paper. It's what you feel, how you think, what's important to you. I do like how it doesn't rhyme. Something new for you! Also it is short and ironic and mocking what we said. But very cool how you changed what we thought of your poem into an actual poem!
haha good, short poem Russell. I like the fact that it shows that you inspired yourself from a lack of inspirations. I think it's creative to write a poem on something that is unusual. Something that usually people wouldn't go for, but you made it work.
ReplyDeletehaha I thought this poem was funny. Nice and short. I think it's cool how poems can be written about absolutely anything!
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